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Deidara - Nothing Is Eternal by ~AvalonStarr:iconAvalonStarr:



Deidara Tribute - Nothing Is Eternal.

You Fought Your Hardest,
Nothing Worked,
You Took A Chance,
And Blew Your Body To Shreds.

As Flash-Fire Raged,
Choking The Sky,
Clogging The Sun,
Everyone Stopped And Turned Their Heads.
Indeed, You Went Out With A Bang,
Just Like You Wanted.

You Brought The World To Its Feet,
And Took It Out By Storm.
But You Paid The Ultimate Price—
Life.

Life, Which Is So Fragile,
You Can Tear It In Two Within A Split Second;
Your Art Did Just That,
You Tore Yourself In Two,
And Failed At The Objective.

Failure, Yes, Can Be Taken Back.
Usually.
This Was Not One Of Those Cases,
To The Dismay And Despair Of Many.

Now You Lie In Summerland With Your Master,
Arguing Over What Art Is.
Fleeting?
Eternal?
Only One Thing Can Seem Eternal;
Death.
©2008 ~AvalonStarr
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OHMYGOD. xD
I think this isnt the best. XD One of my friends i showed it to said it was crap. XD I don't like it very much, to be honest. But, neh...Its not CRAP?! D:
Most i showed it to liked it though. >w>;
Its like, it started out good, then was bad, then was good at the end? idk.
-skips off to write summore-
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~Mangaka-sama:iconMangaka-sama: Jan 26, 2008, 6:32:40 AM
Listen to this with the song "Sooner or later"by Breaking Benjamin
I did and made me cry

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I’ve lived through my share of misfortune
And I’ve worked in the blazing sun

I love my Lord God:pray:
:heart:Nirvana:heart:
~AvalonStarr:iconAvalonStarr: Jan 26, 2008, 7:17:16 AM
I just did..
Awww i'm sorry! D:

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"Dying is funny in ridiculous situations." -Fuji
~Mangaka-sama:iconMangaka-sama: Jan 28, 2008, 3:38:25 PM
^^Dont be sorry that means its a good poem and
it touches ur heart:heart:

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I’ve lived through my share of misfortune
And I’ve worked in the blazing sun

I love my Lord God:pray:
:heart:Nirvana:heart:
~AvalonStarr:iconAvalonStarr: Jan 28, 2008, 3:41:33 PM
D:

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"Dying is funny in ridiculous situations." -Fuji
~Mangaka-sama:iconMangaka-sama: Jan 29, 2008, 3:49:21 PM
:aww:

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I’ve lived through my share of misfortune
And I’ve worked in the blazing sun

I love my Lord God:pray:
:heart:Nirvana:heart:
~AvalonStarr:iconAvalonStarr: Jan 29, 2008, 5:39:32 PM
D:!

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"Dying is funny in ridiculous situations." -Fuji
~Mangaka-sama:iconMangaka-sama: Jan 30, 2008, 4:53:27 PM
ahh cheer up Shi^^

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I’ve lived through my share of misfortune
And I’ve worked in the blazing sun

I love my Lord God:pray:
:heart:Nirvana:heart:
~AvalonStarr:iconAvalonStarr: Jan 30, 2008, 5:44:09 PM
xD NO.

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"Dying is funny in ridiculous situations." -Fuji
~Mangaka-sama:iconMangaka-sama: Feb 2, 2008, 7:01:55 AM
D:

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I’ve lived through my share of misfortune
And I’ve worked in the blazing sun

I love my Lord God:pray:
:heart:Nirvana:heart:
~AvalonStarr:iconAvalonStarr: Feb 3, 2008, 5:57:24 PM
D:!!!

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"Dying is funny in ridiculous situations." -Fuji